tonee89 on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/tonee89/art/Commission-3-dakimakura-560482188tonee89

Deviation Actions

Comments19
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
CheekyCheeko's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I really like this artwork! There's hardly any good fan anime that I've seen! The overall picture is really nice and the coloring is gorgeous. The only thing that doesn't have my interest is that the bed wrinkles seem a bit too white and silky. If the wrinkles were a bit darker and more vivid, it would have a 10/10 but my personal opinion, I give it about a 9 and a half. Good job with the facial expressions, body, and clothing. I really like the skin tone aswell. The eyes are well drawn and have a great glare to them. From my perspective, it looks like a ceiling light is on and that the ticket to show that they're in a bedroom! Good job and I hope my critique was helpful in anyway to you!