| Deviant Login | Shop | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
#ClubPanty
#PWFA
#Super-Perverts
#Ecchi-Club
#love-sexy-club
#AnimeVitalityClub
#Ecchi-Fanartists
#Sex-Addiction-Club
| Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Drawings | ©2012-2013 *tonee89 |
The Journal Portal
Browse Journals |
Polls |
deviantART [dee·vee·un'nt·ART]
Keep in Touch!
|
Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
|
Sta.sh
This does not equal perfection, however. As astounding as your work is aesthetically, I've always found that often times the subjects appear quite flat. Not flat chested, mind you,
you can draw some awesome tits, but I feel if there were some way to print this girl to be real here she'd be stuck in that position forever. Of course, it is just a picture, and the point of drawing her certainly wasn't so she could be materialized in our world (how awesome would that be, though?), but especially with a style like anime there's plenty of ways to fool the eye into seeing a world around the subject. Now, this work doesn't have a scene around it, just a background, but even so, you have to wonder, is this girl just a sexy naked blip that is in empty space for just the time you're looking at her? Or is there more? Can she move, is there personality beyond the smile, is she in some sort of limbo?By all means, don't take my critique as professional. My art can't hold a candle to anything you do. Hell, I still have a hard time coloring in the lines when I do things digitally.
Anyways, my main point is that I'd like to be able to see in my mind your subjects, not just this one, move beyond the pose they were drawn in. Like I said, I'm no pro so how you do that is beyond me. But if you keep up the good work you already do while adding in some tips and tricks you learn from everywhere, I'm sure yuri fans globally will recognize your work as easily as I do.
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.