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Sexy by tonee89 Sexy by tonee89
Random stuff, draw for fun.
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*tonee89, your work has always been of unique interest to me. I can recognize your style from a mile away. Yuri seems all the sweeter when I know it's drawn by an artist like you.
This does not equal perfection, however. As astounding as your work is aesthetically, I've always found that often times the subjects appear quite flat. Not flat chested, mind you,you can draw some awesome tits, but I feel if there were some way to print this girl to be real here she'd be stuck in that position forever. Of course, it is just a picture, and the point of drawing her certainly wasn't so she could be materialized in our world (how awesome would that be, though?), but especially with a style like anime there's plenty of ways to fool the eye into seeing a world around the subject. Now, this work doesn't have a scene around it, just a background, but even so, you have to wonder, is this girl just a sexy naked blip that is in empty space for just the time you're looking at her? Or is there more? Can she move, is there personality beyond the smile, is she in some sort of limbo?
By all means, don't take my critique as professional. My art can't hold a candle to anything you do. Hell, I still have a hard time coloring in the lines when I do things digitally.
Anyways, my main point is that I'd like to be able to see in my mind your subjects, not just this one, move beyond the pose they were drawn in. Like I said, I'm no pro so how you do that is beyond me. But if you keep up the good work you already do while adding in some tips and tricks you learn from everywhere, I'm sure yuri fans globally will recognize your work as easily as I do.
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megaabbystar Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
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Ecchi-collector Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
I like her feet
MaryiSwym Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
that beautiful expression. i like ^^!!
A3Kitsune Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Aquasakura Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Sexy yet cute at the same time. Well done! I love the color of her hair.
DantemaruXXX Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist
She's really cute... the posing is nice also...
teturo Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Yumy pose, and adorable expression ^_^
CloudRider99 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the hat... :meow:
Raphael7 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
randomly sexy :D
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Shes so beautiful
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